Fascinating and more fascinating with each part. Still, Edmund has moments where his alleigence is not clear- even to himself. And this chapter made me love the characters so much. Your OC Edith both convicing Edmund he's a better man and then when she drops the wine. Edgar for showing he IS aware of the situation and for the brother bonding. And, of course for Codelia and Edmund who are both noble in their own- vastly different- ways.
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Date: 2010-06-24 04:55 am (UTC)