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Wait, [livejournal.com profile] hp_summergen reveals have taken place? Whoa, when did that happen? Anyway, my entry is Dear Alastor, written for [livejournal.com profile] cranberry_crash.

Also, some new post-DH fic, very rough and really more of a ficlet, but I swore I'd write at least one story in the Year After-verse a month, so here I am squeaking in just before my self-imposed deadline. George, Verity, May or June 1998.



Tattered posters advertising U-No-Poo still fluttered from the front of the shop. One window had been smashed; it was a testimony to the fear that had kept even thieves out of Diagon Alley that most of the merchandise was still intact.

“Patented Daydream Charms, three dozen boxes,” said Verity.

George ticked them off on his inventory sheet. It occurred to him that he could say there were thirty-five instead of thirty-six; it was his stock, no one would care. He could take one home and indulge himself this evening with a long daydream about – about – Before.

He didn’t. One of Professor Dumbledore’s maxims had been it does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live; he had told the twins that in their first year when he heard them spinning an elaborate fantasy about revenge on some of the older kids who had laughed at their hand-me-down clothes and shared supplies. Which was kind of funny, because he and Fred had kept dwelling on dreams, and the result was this shop, and it had worked out well enough. They’d dreamt up most of the items they sold, hadn’t they? But there were some things you couldn’t dream about without feeling dead miserable when you woke.

“Fever Fudge, twenty boxes.”

“Bin it. It’s stale; we’ll make some new.”

“You are going to re-open the shop, then?”

“Why’d you think we were here, Verity?”

“I wasn’t sure.”

Of course she wasn’t. George hadn’t talked about his plans. He had been used to running his ideas by Fred before he made a decision, or (perhaps more often) looking to Fred to make the decision for him. But somehow, a decision had been made. George wasn’t sure just when he had made it: perhaps when he unlocked the premises that had not been used in nearly a year and contemplated the dusty Skiving Snackboxes and the smashed Magic Fate Ball, which told you which of a hundred dire calamities you were going to suffer in a voice strikingly reminiscent of Sybill Trelawney’s. Perhaps it had been even earlier than that, at the funeral.

“Luminous Lingerie, three brassieres and eight pairs of pants, mixed sizes.”

“Check.”

“You’re – forgive me, but you’re going to need more help around the place, won’t you?”

“I thought maybe my brother Ron would fancy a job. Or Percy, he’s really improved since he resigned from the Ministry, and I reckon a joke shop would suit him down to the ground. Did I tell you he presented Auntie Muriel with a vase full of Farting Flowers the other day?”

Verity looked at him dubiously. “You are joking, aren’t you?” she said after a moment.

“Yes.”

“Were you joking about Ron, too?”

“No.”

“He’d be all right. I’ve only met him once, but he seemed ... nice.” Verity bit her lip, and George wondered if she was thinking the same thing he was. No one had ever described Fred as ‘nice,’ at least not until the funeral, when a lot of people had said a lot of things about a person George hardly recognized as his brother at all.

“Five hundred Belly-Dancing Beer Mats.”

“Check.”

“Peruvian Instant Darkness Powder, three pounds nine ounces.”

“Check.” They’d stopped selling it after the first battle at Hogwarts, but they might as well start again.

Oh! Here’s a cage of Pygmy Puffs, you must have forgotten them when you moved the live stock to your aunt’s.” Verity opened the cage and added, unnecessarily, “They’re dead.”

She started to cry. George moved the cage with its shriveled scraps of pink and purple fur out to the rubbish heap so that she wouldn’t have to look at them, but when he came back Verity was still crying. He decided that this wasn’t really about Pygmy Puffs. “Go home if you like. I’ll finish up without you.”

Verity shook her head. “I’ll stay. I’m all right, really.”

She plainly wasn’t, but George wasn’t either, so he didn’t say anything.

“Extendable Ears, two dozen.” Verity looked up at George. “Could you use one of those?”

George was struck with the idea. “I could. It would be better than the original because of being extendable, and I could make some other improvements...” He grabbed a sketch pad that had been sitting forgotten on a shelf, and began to make notes. “Of course, I’d want to shut it off if I had someone particularly annoying standing on that side of me, and it would be great if I could listen through walls without having to put a glass up to the wall... I know a spell that ought to work, if I can transfer it to the Extendable Ear without having to renew it every time...” It was the first thing he had invented since Fred, and it felt strange to think about that, but he pressed on. “And whenever someone played Celestina Warbeck, I bet I could charm the ear to replace it with the Weird Sisters...”

Verity interrupted this train of thought. “You know what they’re going to call you, right?”

“What?”

“‘Mad-Ear Weasley’.”

George laughed. “‘Mad-Ear Weasley.’ I like it.” He gulped, remembering Mad-Eye, and made himself laugh again.

“Fireworks, eight dozen, assorted.”

“We’re donating those to the Leaky Cauldron. For the celebrations.”

“Oh, are there going to be celebrations?” Verity asked. The second war had ended, not in showers of sparks and floods of mead like the stories George’s parents had told about the legendary Halloween of ‘81, but in quiet reflection and thanksgiving. And in many, many funerals.

“There will be now.”

Date: 2007-09-01 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pearlrose86.livejournal.com
Lovely, just lovely.

I particularly care for the bit about "Mad-Ear", it just seems like the sort of nickname that George would wear like a badge after his original ear was cursed off.

And thank you for posting post-DH things. They're slowly being integrated into a personal post-DH world that I'm growing fond of after being not-so-fond of the last book. In a way, I guess it's closure for all of the minor characters that never had any.

Who says it has to be over?

Date: 2007-09-01 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
As far as I'm concerned, it's never over! I was a little disappointed at first that so many little things never got wrapped up in canon, but the more I think about it, this is just a wonderful playground for us.

Date: 2007-09-01 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] easleyweasley.livejournal.com
As always, worth reading [and is Verity an OC?].

Little things not wrapped up? A horde of them. But if I have one complaint about DH, it's that JKR wrapped up too many in too perfunctory a style. Have a locket, Kreacher? Oh, master! [Undying devotion]. Yes, I am a pompous git, said Percy. I think a little more backstory might be in order for some of these [or maybe the backstory is waiting to be written ...]

Date: 2007-09-01 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
No, Verity, the Weasleys' shop assistant, has a cameo in HBP.

And yeah, I would have been thrilled if JKR had filled things in a little more, but it is a great big brick of a book as it is.

Date: 2007-09-01 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tunxeh.livejournal.com
A simple scene, but moving.

Date: 2007-09-01 12:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-01 07:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] such_heights
That's completely perfect, and quietly heart-breaking!

Date: 2007-09-01 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-09-01 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com
This is lovely - both sad and cheering, because it's nice to think that people pick up and carry on where they left off - and perhaps even let off a few fireworks. (though I felt a terrible pang for the poor Pygmy Puffs)

Date: 2007-09-01 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
I know -- I felt horrible about killing off the Pygmy Puffs, poor things!

Date: 2007-09-01 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aome.livejournal.com
Oh, this was lovely. Sad, and sentimental, but not syrupy. Mad-Ear Weasley, hee.

*sniffles*

Date: 2007-09-01 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
Oh, gosh, your ICON.

Date: 2007-09-01 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aome.livejournal.com
Thanks. :) The artwork is by [livejournal.com profile] _odella_, commissioned by [livejournal.com profile] sesptwd (used with dual permission) - I just did the blackout and text. But it's exactly the sort of thing I wanted, post-DH.

Date: 2007-09-01 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] themolesmother.livejournal.com
Beautiful and melancholy. Loved the idea of "Mad Ear" Weasley - it's so Gred and Forge. Is it me or is there a little hint of Fred/Verity here?

MM

Date: 2007-09-01 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
Well, there wasn't meant to be, so I think it's you :)

Date: 2007-09-04 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nineveh-uk.livejournal.com
It's not just you. Clearly the author's subconscious was at work...

Date: 2007-09-01 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reconditarmonia.livejournal.com
The Extendable Ear thing occurred to me too. ^________^ I think "Mad-Ear Weasley" is now part of my personal canon.

Date: 2007-09-01 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
It's definitely semi-canon, since JKR said she liked the idea during the post-DH online chat.

Date: 2007-09-01 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reconditarmonia.livejournal.com
Eh, I don't take interviews and chats as canon. If she doesn't bother to write it in, then it's not canon canon. :P That said, even canon canon is full of holes. That was not meant to be a pun, but it ended up as one rather.

via crackvan

Date: 2007-09-02 02:26 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] zvi-likes-tv.livejournal.com
That was somewhat unexpectedly hopeful. I liked it.

Re: via crackvan

Date: 2007-09-02 03:32 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-02 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabidsamfan.livejournal.com
Very nice. (Here via crackvan too.)

I love the idea of him using one of the extendable ears -- and of finding his sense of creativity again. Thank you!

Date: 2007-09-02 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-09-02 09:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] snorkackcatcher
Very nice and believable take on George (much more plausible than the angsty/suicidal versions). 'Mad-Ear Weasley' sounds very likely, and some great inventions as always -- 'Magic Fate Ball' indeed. :)

Date: 2007-09-02 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
I want a Magic Fate Ball. I'm not sure exactly what you're supposed to do with Luminous Lingerie, but I think I want some of that as well :)

Date: 2007-09-02 01:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] snorkackcatcher
Actually, now I think about it I wouldn't be especially surprised if there were retailers who sold that, under brown paper wrapping. :) (Not recommended for academic situations, though!)

Date: 2007-09-02 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com
Anne Summers (UK high street toned-down sex shop) stocks it, or at least used to...

Date: 2007-09-02 11:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] snorkackcatcher
Do they? As I say, I wouldn't be surprised.

Date: 2007-09-03 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epj.livejournal.com
Hooray! Hooray for Mad-Ear Weasley and Verity and starting to live again. What a fantastic story.

Date: 2007-09-03 05:08 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-04 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] threerings.livejournal.com
Lovely. Really touching. I love that George goes nuts for the extendable ear idea. And the fireworks!

Date: 2007-09-04 02:24 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-09-04 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] najdorf-var.livejournal.com
Beautiful story. Very much said with very few words. Though I do not share your optimism about using an extendable ear for the lost one "when it´s been cursed off"

Date: 2007-09-04 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-t-rain.livejournal.com
Well, that bit is actually quasi-canon, since JKR said in her web chat that it would be possible for George to get a magical ear :)

Date: 2007-09-13 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchantedteacup.livejournal.com
Sorry for the late review!

This was really, really good. George was realistically characterized and I enjoyed Verity. It was funny and sad, and I loved the ending!

Date: 2007-09-14 01:48 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-13 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hogwartshussy.livejournal.com
I read Reindeer Games for the first time today and decided to peek and see what else you've written.
I love this peek at the Wizarding world one year on. Personally, I would have preferred something like this for the epilogue rather than a vast inventory of the next gen ...........

Date: 2012-03-12 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] profshallowness.livejournal.com
I wouldn't call this rough at all, a fragment, maybe, but a very powerful one.

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